A creative writing piece.
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Content Warning: blood, animal death
Hi, I'm back with another assignment I submitted for my poetry writing class. (Yep, I submitted this. XD)
This is supposed to be a surrealism prose poem. Every idea I came up with was full of violence. Haha, I couldn't help myself.
I also had to read this out loud to the whole class. That was quite something.
This was written around the spookiest time of the year. I mean Halloween.
How's my attempt at writing horror/surrealism? Please tell me. I'm curious.
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The Red Light
You are driving home after a long day of work. There are no lampposts or store lights to lighten the path, and the moon and stars are not visible. Then a red light flashes ahead of you. You slam your foot on the gas pedal as you zoom towards it. As you approach it, it takes the shape of a traffic light. When the front of your car is only a few feet away from the traffic light, you are able to observe it up close. Its red light taunts you, which only motivates you to force the gas pedal to the melting asphalt below. Your car is overheating, burning the ground below, but you do not care. You are too attracted to the red light; it mesmerizes you. On closer inspection, you realize that the shape of the red light differs from that of the yellow and green. The red light is coming from a laser pointer. You have to catch it. Without thinking it through, you run the traffic light. After you pass it, you notice that the red light follows you. A red, round spot the size of the palm of your hand lands on your car’s windshield. Still feeling desperate to catch the red light, you unbuckle your seatbelt and stretch your arms in front of you. As your fingertips touch the glass, a red glow surrounds them. As the red glow drips down your hands, it takes the form of blood. Blood is in the air; blood is on your tongue. This does not horrify you; it is something you anticipated. Less than a minute after staring at the red spot on the windshield and your red hands, everything turns dark. The red light no longer hits the windshield; it simply vanished right in front of you. However, your fingers still feel wet and sticky; your hands are warm. The next thing you remember happening is the sound of the laser which emits the red light turning on and off again. Then the red light does not return; instead, the moon turns the sky yellow. All of a sudden, you see a cat—your cat— standing on its hindlegs and holding a gigantic laser pointer in your direction. The cat drops the laser, its red light spilling onto the ground, and approaches you to pick your car up. It unlocks a car door and grabs hold of you, cradling you in its paws. As the car crashes down into the near-boiling asphalt of the street, the cat scratches your head and tells you to eat your pet rabbit you hunted and killed in the morning. Then the cat leaves, and you stand on the roof of your car. You excitedly wait for your cat to play the red light game with you again and give you your dinner. The burning metal does not hinder your appetite for bloody rabbit.
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Hope you enjoyed reading this! >:D
............. Yay, I'm able to insert images in my posts again. Just on the website, of course.
I'm still feeling... pretty unhappy. I planned on posting this a little while back.
The feelings of dread that I got from this piece was really fascinating. Like, sub-consciously I knew where this was going, and it felt really weird. Like watching a car-crash in slow motion...
ReplyDeleteThe description of red and blood and heat I practically felt (or maybe it was because I've currently got my period and it's pretty hot atm, but I digress). Also the sky outside my window is very VERY yellow, which also added to the mood. (because of all the smoke from the fires we've been having in Australia lately)
And surreal cat is surreal. This what I think goes through pets' minds sometimes... That also added to the creepiness factor a little.
I've said it once and I'll say it again - your awesome with words. And yes. I enjoyed reading through this. <3
Since I've first read your comment here, I've read a little about the Australian fires. The situation sounds truly awful. I hope you're safe and doing okay.
DeleteAh haha, if I felt like that and saw the sky outside my window was also yellow, I might've freaked out. What a coincidence! XD
Giant surreal cat. O_O hehehe ^w^
Thank you so much! <3
Ooh, yeah. We're caught between a rock and a hard place, but thankfully the fires haven't gotten *that* close to where I live. It's mostly the people who live in the middle of nowhere or on farms that have the most to worry. The firemen are working really hard to protect us and to keep everything under control. We show our appreciation by giving them sandwiches and stuff. <3
DeleteHaha, I've heard that some countries have been getting our smoke secondhand. Would be pretty funny if you got some, too. Share our suffering! XD