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Saturday, January 9, 2016

Chapter 50 Info

Hey, read this. Phew, no one commented yet. Read this post before you comment on the chapter. But after you read it. Okay thanks. 

So all the POVs start a day later from Chapter 49. And at nighttime. I've been on writer's block because I didn't know how to continue the story. So I decided to not type all those fillers, and just skip to all the action parts. Which makes it all the more confusing as heck. Heh...

Fauna found this fog called the Jamaa Mist. Fierdan communicated with her from Cincernum, and they're planning some things. So mysterious...

Calliah is with the rest of the Fierdan hunters like Taurel, Risak, Sparkle, Finny, and all the rest of those guys. They're planning the kidnapping and torturing of Duke, and are planning on doing it in a few days' time. Calliah was forced to be part of Taurel's team, but of course, she's an outsider and hates them. Finny and Sparkle got recruited to join Taurel's team because he told them they would be doing an act of justice if they betrayed their old friend, Duke. They thought doing that would save Jamaa. But once they got to this building, the rest of the adults in Taurel's team and himself talked about how their plan of attack would work. So Finny and Sparkle find out. And Finny starts disagreeing with Taurel's views, but Sparkle tries to tell him that what they're doing is right. But soon after, especially with how cruel Risak is, she also starts disagreeing with Taurel's views. And then Calliah interferes. Ooh...

Twinkle had this traumatizing dream with explanations and more questions. I can't really say what that nightmarish dream was about, but it was about her role and relationship in TEO. And how she's worth so much, even more than Duke or Fierdan. And she really wants Black Raven to explain, but she can't. Then she had another flashing thought that told her to break her tailpiece because it was holding her back. So she had this unnaturally strong energy, and she completely destroyed it. And she had this look that Duke gets, but instead of it being orange or black, it's blue. And slightly different. Like more ice-like. With bigger wings because of the ice, for example. And she falls asleep again, only dreaming of this image of a simple blue fox and orange fox. When it leaves, only endless blackness remains. But it won't let Twinkle wake up from it. 

Duke was in nightmares and memories for all of the italics part. If you think the sentences and thoughts don't make that much sense and are unclear, then that's great. I intended it to be that way. He later wakes up with Dawn looking over him (yes, with clothes on... heuheu). And his mind is growing even more unstable. So his thoughts are not straight and clear. So he believes he's actually on this dark gray cloud, and not on the ground where he really is. Then he dreams he's in this hospital/therapy room with this therapist he once talked to for real. But it was strange because she knew everything about him, even things he never remembered telling her. And the room was weird. And some guy stole his clothes. So Blossom asks Duke questions that would usually make him refuse to answer. But here, he answers them all like a lifestory. So Duke laughs and talks like it's no big deal, when he tells her he almost killed himself when he was only six for the first time. Then he went on explaining how he would be so happy if this thing in his heart got out. And then how he wanted to tear his heart if it got to that. Ever since age six, officially. Which then, of course, resulted him in not thinking clearly as usually. Especially with all the family trauma he was witness to and endured himself. And now with his mind being played with by Soulless and Fierdan, he's even more unstable. And since Fierdan really wants to die even through everything, Duke feels that way more than ever. Then Duke goes on about drugs, explaining all of this in this blurred, toxicated voice to the therapist. Then about Twinkle and Dawn. And she only nods at him, not saying anything. Then the room disappears and the dark gray cloud is back. And he kinda has this mental breakdown about how he's sorry for everything and misses the past. Haha, his POV is kinda confusing. 

So yeah, that's basically Chapter 50. Skipping to more interesting story parts. 

See ya! >;)
~ Cutepups 


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