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Now continuing with the same concept from last post in that Fierdan poem.
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A drawing. By me. ^-^'
Oh how lovely c;
He's obviously a human in this drawing. (Just in case any of you weren't sure..)
From the view of the drawing, the right is the "corrupted half". As you can see with all the blood, scars, and flames on that side. XD
The other half is the "hidden half". Others see him (like when he's a fox.. lawl) as only corrupted, so the "corrupted half" is the visible half while the other one is not (hence the name, "hidden half").
But since there is a "corrupted half", he will always be corrupted and broken no matter what. As long as that "corrupted half" exists. And it can't go away, and it won't go away.
The corruption is shown as flames because that's when he started becoming corrupt. When he felt fire inside him as he stood in the dark, surrounded by the dead (Chapter 42). When he called himself, Fear (only Fear- not any other word), and changed the spelling to the feeling he felt inside him, fire, to Fier. When that happened (changing his name from Daniel to Fierdan). Becoming corrupt as he started to hate the world(s) and his father, Zios, for what he created (the darkness that Fierdan got eternally trapped in).
The corruption is also shown as blood- fresh blood and dried scars- due to all the abuse. One, Duke (Fierdan's second, secretly corrupted, self, "reincarnation") being "abused" in his past. Two, the abuse due to being possessed, controlled by someone, and being forced to do stuff. And if not cooperating, the abuse of being hurt from the inside out (Fierdan's "Anonymous POV" in Chapter 41).
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See how long I explained the drawing? XD
Peace.~
Comment down below some Fierdan stories because reading them would entertain my poor, bored soul. ;u;
I love these :D
ReplyDeleteAww, thank you! :)
DeleteWait.. My drawings, my writings, or my blog in general? XD
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DeleteOnce upon a time, little Fierdan had a cookie. One day, he woke up to his cookie gone, and he cried. Then he remembered that he ate the cookie before he went to sleep. Danny cursed himself. The end.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Fierdan story, Mutters. It's really.. majestic. I can picture it as an animated short done in a kawaii style (Fierdan being a chibi with huge circle eyes and a big head compared to his body, and the cookie having a smiley face on it that turns into a frowny face when he eats the cookie). Omg it's so cool!
DeleteJust one of those shorts that are 30 seconds long, and when you finish watching it, you wonder why you wasted those 30 seconds of your life when you could've been doing something else? XD
DeleteYes... X3
DeleteOnce upon a time, Fierdan turned into a turtle. Then he slipped over a black banana and exploded. The. End. (Twinkle exploded too, but she had turned into a pizza)
ReplyDeleteSo cool story bro 8D
Deleteehhh... I'll write a story for you then >8) (sorry it is late meh dear) * for the sake of the story, I'm calling your hell-type place "the Void" as used in my story. Easier I guess. XD
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"Dawn! Dawn!" I yelled, and the wall exploded, an army of foxes came in, bearing torches and with bloody murder in their eyes.
"Dawn!" I screamed, my voice horse with pain. "Dawn!" They began to wrap me up in rough, coarse rope.
"Shut up!" One of them screamed at me, anger in their eyes. They looked like they wanted to burn me on the spot.
"Please!" I yelled, "I didn't do anything wrong!"
"Wrong? You burned the villages and all of our families! What is so right about that?"
"It was a mistake, please!"
But they wouldn't listen.
When a sheep becomes a wolf, it can not become a sheep again.
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The torture room. It smelled like the Void.
Experiments. Blood. And most of all- pain.
I cried out. I pleaded with them. I told them I changed my ways.
I was haunted, every day, by a soulless creature who haunted me. It had done this to me.
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"Fierdan..." a voice whispered. It was Soulless.
"I told you! I want nothing to do with you!"
"Do you want to come back to the Void?" Soulless, shrieked, his voice suddenly cold and hard.
"You have already lost your soul, but now I will take even more from you if you keep doing this," Soulless whispered, and I could taste the blood even stronger in my mouth. I was slowly losing myself.
"Please, let me go!" I yelled, and voices around me whispered to each other. Voices of foxes. I could feel dead souls around me too, like the voices of my dead parents- that I killed.
The rope was still tight. I felt weaker from the pain of the rope.
I'll get my revenge, I heard myself say, a stronger voice now in my head. It was powerful, painful. I never wanted it there.
"Keep thinking that way," Soulless whispered, "and I will keep you safe," it was almost like something a loved one would say. But it sounded like a threat.
"Get out of my life!" I hissed, and Soulless snarled. "Get out of your life?" He shrieked again, angry at me. "What would your life be then? With your parents who betrayed you? Your love who wants to kill you? Please. Without me, your life would STILL be nothing!" He yelled, his voice echoing in my head.
"Stop!" I yelled. "Stop..." The pain was unbearable. The foxes doing this to me made the pain worse. The pain in me....after this, it would be gone.
I felt an emptiness inside, like something was missing. Like I would eventually kill everyone I loved, and eventually - kill myself.
OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! ^^ :D <3
DeleteThis might (MIGHT) had helped me with story ideas. Not sure yet. But thank you, I wanted to read at least one legit Fierdan story (yours is more legit than Fierdan eating a cookie or turning into a turtle.. sorry guys above). ^.^
Ha ha thanks. Feel free to use the ideas, if you want to! I'm glad to help x3
DeleteYa.. I figured you wanted an actual story. (No offense either). ^v^