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Phantoms, arctic wolves, Calliah, the governments, Fierdan, Zios and Mira, Soulless, Duke......
..... and the list still goes on.
Haha, do any of you remember back in the day when I made Twinkle's Story focused on how Calliah (Duke's mother- not Fierdan's by the way) is the main "evil"? And now how it seems like it's Fierdan in chapters nowadays?
Well, there's a reason why I don't focus on ONE, SPECIFIC "evil" in the story. Sure, not adding all these mini-plots in the main plot would make the story itself far less long. But come on. Without all the complexity of the "true evil" in the story, it would make the story more boring and predictable.
Get what I'm saying?
On another note, adding all these different "evils" is one of the themes in Twinkle's Story and the rest of The Extraordinary Others series (about that, no, the other stories won't be called Duke's Story, Fierdan's Story, Fauna's Story, Dawn's Story... totally different titles).
So here's what I'm thinking of calling the Twinkle's Story theme that relates to the "evil" concept that this post is mainly about:
"There is no such thing as "one, true evil" in our world- we all make up part of that "true evil". Evil is not in just one, specific person or thing- it is in all of us. The world is a dark, evil place, and the people in it are no exception. There is evil in all of us- or there is no evil at all."
Yes. I am thinking of making that a theme in the TEO series.
As the series progresses (like when the next story starts), you'll (hopefully) come to realize how true that theme is.
"There is no such thing as "one, true evil" in our world." Spoiler: Calliah is not the "true evil"; Duke/Fierdan is not the "true evil". They just have evil in themselves (Fierdan more than Calliah by far), but they're not candidates for the main "evil" that I never formerly introduced to any of you yet (and I won't- for now).
The only character that I introduced that may classify as the main "evil" is Soulless. Zios is not even close to being as "evil" as Soulless. Soulless is just so... soul less.
In other words, many characters in the series can be classified as "evil", but there are many others and not just one "evil". Their levels of "evil" just vary.
And with that, I bid you farewell.
~ Cutepups522, author of Twinkle's Story
And I end this post with a quote that somewhat relates to this post. Found on Google.
Oh ya man...you orginally started with evil/good but you ended up making it a good theme! (If you know what I mean lol)
ReplyDeleteI like to think that no one is nessarily "good" or "evil". We just sometimes make big or little mistakes...that can not be changed...and that hurt others. Lol I can't really explain it that well. x3
Oh, I get what you mean, man. X3
DeleteI also recommend trying to figure out the "grey areas" if ya now what I mean.
ReplyDeleteAnyways plot twist: you didn't excpect this.
Soulless:::
He had lost his soul a long time ago, that he no longer felt what it was like to be human. He covered up the nothing he felt with anger and blood; the only things that were left-that he remembered.
He remembered cutting into his skin, blood pouring out, and doing it again, and again, to make himself feel alive. He had destroyed himself. He made himself that way. There was no one left to save him- who would save a soul that was no longer...there?
He was there, but he was not. Because what is a person, without a soul? He wondered.
They thought him evil; did they? They blamed him for their own problems. He only brought out the evil that was already inside them. They blamed him for being there-just like they had once did long ago.
You could keep blaming people; for the evil that they did themselves. It was easy to shape the world in black and white like he once did. No one was evil. No one is good. There is only yourself; and the problems you create. You cannot blame others for your actions; and yet, you can not create exuses for what you did wrong.
The goverment thought they could create a better world by doing bad things. The mother thought she could protect her son by being evil herself. Fierdan killed thousands of people; but never blamed himself. Duke wanted to protect Twinkle, but only ended up hurting her and being cruel to others. But he never thought it was wrong. Twinkle's parents thought that Fauna was the best, and blamed Twinkle for their problems.
The world is cruel; but it is all of our faults. We have to survive the world on our own, and face our own monsters.
We all have a terror inside of us; I just bring it here.
Oh my god, what you just said almost put tears in my eyes, it's so true. *cough* the end of your comment *cough*. And even though I never actually said it in a chapter, Duke gets to be so cruel.. reasons behind everything.. gah. And hurts Twinkle. Gah.... I love your comment so freaking much <3.
DeleteBut Soulless isn't an actusl being- human, fox, anything. He's just like a bundled up ghostly spiritual creature that's only desire to hurt others. Tbh idek if Soulless is male or female (Soulless isn't a normal being... I just call Soulless, Soulless XD). And not just Fierdan. He (I'll just refer to Soulless as a he for the heck of it) has "possessed" other people too. He comes over and possesses people's bodies and souls and minds and hearts and all that kind of stuff. Especially to people who feel helpless; weak. Internal torture if people disobey him (ones he's possessing). All in all, Soulless is just a character in the story to take over you, torture you with only you knowing since it's only internal body torture (phydical and mental), and make your already crappy life without him a living hell for you.
Oh and he's been like a ghost figure for, like, ever. (Way before Fierdan at least.). But who knows, he might've once been a diabolical human or other being just there to take advantage of everyone else's weaknesses.
Ugh, stupid typos..
DeleteUgh I know XD after commenting I realized that Soulless was practically a demon XD oh well though. Lol I was wrong. I just like putting bad guys in the perspective of good for you anyways X3
Deleteha ha it makes me so happy when you love my comments C:<3
Ah, I enjoyed reading your story in your comment though.
DeleteDawn's Story
ReplyDeleteYESYESYESYES
There won't be a Dawn's Story.
DeleteFor obvious reasons that I can't say due to spoilers.
And besides, she's kinda a jerk. For reasons I can't say due to spoilers.
So, all in all....
NONONO
"For obvious reasons that I can't say due to spoilers"
DeleteDOES SHE DIE?!?!?!?!??!?!?!
Lol I'm not telling anyone.
DeleteI honestly don't know. Like should it be letter A death, letter B death, or letter C death. (Note that not all of those options are legitimate/related to death at all.).
Oh yes, I love confusing my viewers. Me so suspiciouso. >;)
ya when you said stuff like Dawn's Story and all those other stories there was like a bolt of excitement in me :'D lol
DeleteTo be completely honest, I really regret calling the first story, Twinkle's Story. I have way better title names in mind for the sequels though.
DeleteOmg name it Spinny's Story
DeleteNah..
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