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Sunday, August 9, 2015

Ehemm

Well, there was something wrong. I couldn't sleep well because my stomach decided to be a... uh... a jerk. Not good, that's not good, children.

So yeah... e.e

I feel slightly better now, but it still kinda hurts.

And that's my irl crud at this very moment.

Oh and another irl crud thing. I woke up (without going back to sleep afterwards) around 7:30. My dad usually wakes up around 6:00 (yes, when we share the same hotel room on vacations). He was still asleep when I woke up. I was the first one awake, apparently.

I find that quite strange.

Eeyup.

Now blogging crud. ;3

Omg a lot of people quickly voted on the poll! 0.0

Explanation time! :0

I randomly had an idea the other day of rewriting the prologue of Twinkle's Story. Like I want to compare one I make now to one I made April 2014. Way more descriptive. And better. And just not cringe-worthy (I hope).

And in these rewrites, I'm probably gonna type paragraphs without the extra space inbetween.

But for the rest of the nonrewrite chapters I have to finish, I'll type paragraphs in the same way I've always done. (I change my writing grammar too much it's not even funny. o.e)

I'll still keep up the old, cringe-worthy chapters, of course. I just wanna compare the old to the new.

And read your feedback too.

I'm focusing on making the characters' traits (physical and mental) more distinct and noticeable at first than way later in the story.

See where I'm getting at?

So yeah.

Peace.~  ☆♡☆♡☆

6 comments:

  1. Aww, I hope you'll feel better :)

    THAT WOULD BE REALLY COOL. BUT I PROBABLY WOULDNT BE ABLE TO DO IT BECAUSE IT MENTALLY HURTS PULLING UP MY OLD WORKS. hURtS.

    *puts hand over heart* you have the strength to do it, Cutepups. I'm proud :'D

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    1. I feel better now. ;u;

      I know, I know, Madam Mutters. It's *dramatically places sweaty hand over heart* dedication. :'3

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  2. that would be interesting to see ouo now you can do foreshadowing! lawl

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  3. It glitched and let me vote five times

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