I think I'm going to post some photos I took on my phone by posting them to my deviantart and saving those to my iPad. And then creating posts on my iPad despite it working badly. I feel like I'm gonna use my iPad to post a lot more now.
Yeah sure whatever.
Well, I'm just gonna list some story writing commentary or whatever it's supposed to be called.
Yes. 😉☺
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Want to know a thing about writing Twinkle's Story chapters that annoys me so much?
Viewers: what? no..
Well, I'll tell you!
Viewers: but why..
It's because I decided to format the chapters to have these two things:
1. First person point of view (1st POV)
2. Present tense
I don't know why, but I feel like the chapters being written in that format annoys you guys. Believe me, I know. It annoys me, too.
But will I change it? Nah. I want this cursed story to have some consistency in it, okay.
If you're confused by what I just said, let me explain.
First POV means the story is told from whatever character I'm on's perspective. So for example in Twinkle's POV, "I" is referring to her.
And present tense means that dialogue, as an example, is written as "say" or "says" instead of "said" which is seen more often in books.
Yeah, I don't know. Younger me decided to format the story that way, but now it kinda gets on my nerves.
Hmm.. might be because it sounds unprofessional. Sounds off. Awkward.
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Hey.
How do you feel about my two newest named characters, Jinx and Jax?
What are your thoughts on those guys?
I'm curious so tell me.
Oh and have some fun facts about them:
1. One of my Chapter 75 drawings is of Jinx and Jax.
2. I originally was gonna make them villains, but then I thought of something better.
3. I kinda see them as the two halves in a yin-yang. Or, like, puzzle pieces.
4. Uh.. Chapter 57 though. Mm.
5. Uh.. Jainx though. Mm.
6. Mm omg I think I'm so clever. Ha!
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Another one of my Chapter 75 drawings is of Twinkle.
I love her. Omg you guys. I love my blue daughter.
I keep on drawing her as a boy. That feel when I draw a character who is a girl look more like a boy than my characters who are actually guys (*cough* Duke and Fierdan *cough*).
She is called "Stella, the star-named child" by Jax. What do you think that means?
It has meaning. They have a lot of meaning. So much. Meaning. Gah ok!
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I might or might not have been listening to anime soundtrack music
Um.. heck.
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Chapter 75, a summary:
Taurel:
- Omg <3 it's Him! <3 <3
- I wanna break him and make him bleed. Break his face. His blood. Omg!!
- I have that superior complex because I'm a Savior, dammit!
- Honor to my father! :0
- Here's my motive to wanting revenge on Fierdan by beating the crap out of Duke and scarring him forever. :}
Dawn:
- DUKE!!! Where the heck is he?!
- Stop being bitter with me, Duke. Why are you so stupid?! :/
- Yes, I'm The Dawn. I'm the green queen goddess, dammit!
- This boy doesn't belong to you. :/
- Screw consequences, Duke and I are gonna fight you. Fite me! >:0
- Who is she???
Duke:
- Zoned out in a flashback going about his entire life with Sparkle.
- Huh what did I miss? ... Oh sh!t.
- Sparkle... :0
- Go away, Soulless. :/
- I'm a bad boy who can't be saved. B")
- Twinkle said she hates me, but I'm going to say I love her because Dukle has to live on. <3
- Omg he worded it like that. Making that sound sexually.. wtf Duke omg dammit no wonder Taurel is gonna beat you up. :/ (jk..?)
- Zoned out in a flashback about Admiral suddenly kissing him. Harassment? Nah bruh!
- idfk insert a lenny face here
- Is Duke said is gay?
- F*ck you, Sparkle. Twinkle is beautiful and can write unlike you! :/
- What's wrong with being gay? (Duke- social justice advocate 2k17)
- Disconnects from feelings like bruh.
- What? Gay? No, I'm a certified Straight TM! *flirts with Twinkle and kisses her an X number of times* Finny? Who's he? Pfft. I have that cliche edgy straight boy main character vibe. Bi whom??
- Stop with your bs, Sparkle.
- Fierdan, the writing prodigy. Before He got contaminated. F*ck you, Sparkle.
- Parallel between Duke throwing orange fire at Sparkle and Fierdan throwing black fire at Dawn.
- Taurel is a creep wtf.
- WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH MY WOLF BRO, ARDERE?!
- Duke, you're gonna get screwed over. >;)
Twinkle:
- Why am I following this suspicious dude down this underground passageway?
- Phantoms can't come in.. sounds fake but okay.
- Dang ok. Another suspicious one.
- You're being suspicious, so I'll kill you! :0
- Who the hell is Stella the star-named child?
- Ugh, of course phantoms have to follow me. :/
- Activate your sword! But wtf does that mean??
- Gosh Twinkle, are you trying to be Rin now?
- Is the J duo famous down here or something?
- Wtf you set me up! If you two are immune, then you fight the phantoms. :/
- Fine ok. I'm gonna kill some f*cking phantoms today.
- Now, prepare to die. In.. three, two, one.
Fauna:
- Ha, I have feelings too! Look, I'm angry. That's a reference to my sister. :}
- Why do you sound like that?!
- Fierdan likes staring at his
- Stop with this Soulless bs! :/
- Damn, his hair though. Gorgeous problematic boy.
- Fierdan in pain. Ahh, save him! (oh but Chapter 76...)
- A life without Soulless, huh..
- Fierdan goes from 0 to 100 about suicidal theme.
- Dang ok fine, Fierdan. O.O
- What game are you playing at?!
- No! Wtf Fierdan! I don't know what it's like to kill someone, and I don't know anything about human anatomy! D:<
- Ok I get it. You know how to break people's bodies. Geez thanks for that 0 to 100.
Yeah. That was basically the chapter. XD
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So, you know those anime blogs on tumblr with those gifsets?
Viewers: What does this say? Suddenly, I can't read.
I keep on imagining there being one that has different images/gifs of Fierdan in Chapter 75 and 76. Gifs such as Fierdan staring at his paws (palms up and in fists), his hair falling (<3 boi!), Fierdan crying and getting tortured by Soulless in that flashback- + a lot more from Chapter 76.
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When I'm writing chapters, I feel like I have this weird auto-correct in my head.
In my head, I'll be like "hand" or "hands", right? But when I go to type, there's this conversion in my head.
Hand or Hands --> Paw or Paws
For the millionth time, when the characters describe paws they mean hands.
Paws aren't like dog or cat paws. They're hands, okay? Hands!
Just like the word "human" wasn't in their mental dictionary for a long time, "hand" isn't either.
Well, for now anyways. Ha, ha. Yeah.
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I'm not sure if anyone realized it, so I'll point it out now.
In Taurel's POV, we discover a motive for Taurel wanting his revenge on Fierdan by wanting to torture Duke (the supposedly only alive Fierdan- which is false of course but he doesn't know that).
So the motive is that the little girl (refer to Chapter 60) Fierdan killed was Taurel's father's sister (aka Taurel's aunt).
But in Fauna's POV, Fierdan isn't an old guy. He's seen as being a few years older than Duke, Twinkle, Dawn, etc.
So, well, ?????????
Well, you see, there might be an explanation about it in Chapter 76.
And like, Fierdan in Cincernum was his rebirth. Because there was a time gap between his "death" and him being in Cincernum.
Or perhaps Fierdan and Dawn look so young because they're immortal. XD
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If you think Fierdan sounds like a nerd, then you have a big storm coming.
Ryen is on a whole other level of smart.
Yeah ok lol.
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I freaking love analyzing the character relationships (aka parallels) between Duke and Taurel and Fierdan and *insert name of little girl he killed*.
Let me just say this.
Fierdan's POV in Chapter 76 is an emotional rollercoaster train wreck set on fire.
Oh and lol. Did anyone realize that in older chapters, Fauna's POV was first and Fierdan's POV was last? But ever since Fauna arrived in Cincernum, Fauna's POV became last? Yeah and I'm thinking of putting Fierdan's POV first for Chapter 76.
I keep on imagining this happening:
Viewers: *imagine the Fierdan-girl parallel as Fierdan being this predator and the little girl being terrified*
Me: *thinking about future scenes* Ha, ha.. yeah.
Oh, I guess I should say the parallel in the time where the story is in now. Not in the actual flashback.
I don't want to reveal anything. Sorry.
It's called being mystified.
Oh and while I'm talking about Fierdan's POV in Chapter 76, have some notes:
There will be (in more graphic details this time) violence (blood, body horror), abuses (yes, s), and killing mentions in Chapter 76.
Much more detail this time. Um.. Fierdan.
But there will also be gore and killing in Twinkle's POV. Yeah.
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The title says "more shrugging" because I shrug since I don't know how else to summarize this post.
Yeah, I'm done now.
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