Hi again. XD
Before you go on reading this post, a recommended suggestion.
DO NOT READ THE REST OF THIS POST IF YOU HAVE NOT ALREADY READ CHAPTERS 21 AND 47 OF TWINKLE'S STORY.
Well then. >:)
So, my guess is that many of you are wondering how I was evil to my characters in Chapter 47 (besides the usual beating up and all that). So, I'll tell you. ehehehe
So, first off, I planned it out to be this way. And how it happened to fall on the same weekend makes it even better. Like, a lot better. >;)
So, you all probably know what happened in Chapter 21. Right? No, you forgot? Eh, as a reminder, I'll just say it now.
Chapter 21: Twinkle and Duke are on the roof of the Tall Tower on a pretty chilly night; first time Duke takes off his shirt and allows Twinkle to see his cursed phantom flame mark on his heart (which really means something); and it's the first time they kiss.
Now, I posted Chapter 21 very early Sunday morning on September 21, 2014. (I know it's a Sunday without checking also because, later that morning I was getting ready to go to my cousin's wedding that day. Yes.)
So now, Chapter 47. I posted that very early Sunday morning on September 20, 2015. In other words, Chapter 47 was posted a year after Chapter 21 was. Hmm.. lemme see.. that would mean that I posted 26 chapters in a year. ..yeah, I think so.. 26.
So, back to the point. The events in Chapter 47 (the chapter that marks the first anniversary of Chapter 21- my bae chapter) are really different than Chapter 21.
Chapter 47: Dawn and Duke are standing under this mountain in this desert-like environment in the middle of the day (so it's hot); first time Duke takes off his shirt and allows Dawn to see his cursed phantom flame on his heart (reincarnations); and it's the first time they kiss (as reincarnations).
It's probably just me and my weird thoughts, but can't you see how much betrayal is in that? ;o;
Like, in a year (of me writing chapters, not actual story events lol), so many story things changed. The environment.. even with Duke's.. um, love interests. Last year's chapter (21), Twinkle. This year's chapter (47), Dawn. Kinda similar stuff took place.
And like how now Duke's betrayals are beginning. Oh yeah. I'm trying to not make it too obvious or go by all at once, but by now (starting a few chapters ago) Duke is starting to slowly grow insane and heartless and cruel and all those bad things.
Chapter 44: He had no sympathy when he saw him (well, Fierdan, but.. you get what I mean) getting hurt very badly.
Chapter 45: He was having vivid dreams of hurting people (Dawn), and his fiery wings turned completely black (black flames = evil, death flames) for the first time ever since the Night of the Black Flames (night where Soulless-possessed Fierdan and phantom-possessed Calliah were with that kettle and then Duke started to begin acting kinda evil afterwards; caused Duke to start possessing the black flames after being covered in them).
Chapter 46: His interest in seeing blood increases as well as his interest in seeing pain and hurt for the blood to come out; he even admits he somehow, subconsciously caused the fox territory phantom attacks (phantom at arctic wolf and fox battle.. basically, he caused Fauna's death to some extent; phantom sightings in the main city area in fox territory; and Twinkle's 2 very close, near-death experiences with phantoms.. yeah, Duke even attempted to kill her (subconsciously) even from the start).
Chapter 47: Duke, so desperate to not even blame Fierdan anymore for killing all those people, blames Zios for the killings (but doesn't explain why.. Duke doesn't remember so he can't anyways) and tries-but-fails to blame it all on Soulless. But Fierdan was the one who did the actual killing.. he was the one who did those fire-related deaths and all that.. not Zios, not Mira, not even Soulless. It was all Fierdan (possessed by Soulless, yes, but he did kill those people). And Duke, now becoming like a second Fierdan more than ever, won't admit Fierdan (basically himself) killed those people. Days before, Duke would've been glad to blame Fierdan.. but now that he's slowly becoming more like him and insane, he's not even blaming and hating Fierdan anymore. And then he even kisses Dawn.
So yeah.. Duke isn't that "good guy" as much as he used to.
... What. I totally forgot where I'm going with this.. and why. XD
I don't even know why I'm posting this to be honest. Just some random story stuff I got stored in my head ever since yesterday. :3
Bye!
~ ☆Cutepups☆ ~
Lol what's even gonna happen to Duke haha :v
ReplyDeleteUm ok. You remember my story, amiright? Well I think I'm being a little obsessed too. Because I'm thinking about it a lot. And I really want this story to be different from my other stories. And it's weird haha. What if I become obsessed to??? My gad.
- too tired to comment good comments (GAH it's so late)(SCHOOL IS TOTURE)
Duke: Bruh.
DeleteBrock: Hey, that's my line, drunkie!
Duke: *fake kills Brock with fiery claw.. X'D*
Duke: Swag.
Fierdan (in hell place I still have to get an official name for): Stop embarrassing me, Duke.
Soulless: No, bad Fierdan, bad, be bad! *internally hurts Fierdan*
Fierdan: *screams in pain*
Soulless: Good boy.
Duke: I like violence.
Duke's mind: bloodbloodviolenceviolencefirefirefireswagswegkillmurderevilinsanityblahblahblah
Fierdan (now possessed by Soulless): Good boy, Duke puppet robot, good boy.
..What..
I don't know, man. I just don't. School is torture, but not that tortuous for me yet. Idk. ?.?
You've posted like, 3 time or something today. Well, happy Duke's first kiss anniversary!
ReplyDeleteReally, when? 0.0
Delete... I guess.. sorta? Idk. ...Dammit Duke! >:0
Ugh sorry my brain doesn't read properly at like 6 in the morning. I thought you said you saw a post exactly like this one (but different) 3 times already. And I was confused. But yeah, I make more than 1 post a day.. sometimes. XD
DeleteDUKIE'S FIRST KISS WENT A LITTLE LIKE: bonjour ma belle~. Est-ce que tu voulais voire ce chose? Je ne sais pas comment dire les autre mots en francais, donc... THERE'S MUTTERS ATTEMPTING TO TYPE FRENCH OFF THE TOP OF HER HEAD. But, HAPPY FIRST-KISS ANNIVERSARY, DUKIE-PUKIE!!!
ReplyDeleteWhen I read your comment in the moderation thing, I was very confused. This is what I read in my head (translated c;): Hello ma belle. This is what you want to choose? I no sass pass comment dire less auto more in French, but...
DeleteI think I translated that French wrong. XD
Gah, stop it guys ok. Anniversary of the bae chapter. At anniversary of bae chapter, Duke becomes jerk butt stupid puke. :3
I WAS REALLY CONFUSED WHEN YOU TRANSLATED IT. It was:
ReplyDeleteHello beautiful~. Do you want to see this thing? I don't know how to comment/say the other words in French, so…
I'M SORRY, BUT I READ ONE PART OF YOUR COMMENT "No sass no pass" and I started laughing, I'm sorry XD
Pfft, I was close enough. (jk lol)
DeleteIt's fine, I laughed when I translated it to that too. XD
Let's see, um. Onto the skit, I have made? Note: The reason I don't post my comments alot is because I always have to go to Track.
ReplyDeleteDawn: *Puke, I mean, er, um Duke stops kissing her* That was... amazing.
Duke: I guess.
Lola: (a very smart Pokemon Trainer o,o) Stop it! Twinkle is much cuter! How dare you! *slaps duke* I'm only 10!!! 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Twinkle: Ummina. 0,0 How dare you, Duke!
Bruh, bruh, bruh, Brock the Ugly Fox: Guys, I just met Brock that Pokemon Guy and Brock the Broccoli. I ate Brock the Broccoli and he was so FAB!
Sparkle: Ugh, be quiet Brock. You're are already a creep enough that you call me Honey.
Finny: You're with me, remember?
Sparkle: Stop it! Scooting into conversations is NOT my idea of love!
Twinkle: You! Ugh! *disappears in the wind*
Frozenstarmick: So, hai! You are not baes! I don't know why I'm here!
Audience: Groooan... Another LONG gesture of Frozenstarmick!
Frozenstarmick: You won't listen to me because I don't have enough achievements? It's only because I don't get on alot! *disappears into the ocean*
Lola: *disappears in the lighting*
Dawn: Gosh, Lola is so, so... ummina! *disappears in a flower*
Duke: *disappears in flames*
Brock: *disappears into rocks with an Onix*
Sparkle: *disappears in sparkly fairy wind*
Finny: *disappears into the moon? o,o*
Frozenstarmick: Um, well I'm runnin' out! Bai, my (not) baes!
Okay, er. Well, I'm running out of space so, UMMINA 0,0 ~Frozenstarmick.
Quote by me: Kindness doesn't come from the outside, but from the beauty you hold inside. Note: You don't have to put this on the Inspiring Quotes and Poems. :)
Your skits really are beautiful, and yes, I missed your comments, bae.
DeleteUmmina O_O []_[] ♡.♡ ¤.¤
I like your quote too. :3