I'm busy today. Got another long paper to write. Got tests to study for. Ah, I'm stressed.
This doesn't have to do with my story, but I'll just say it now. Ok so. Last Thursday on our class trip, we also went to this big and famous bookstore. A famous bookstore! It was great! We all loved it! I bought myself a book that I wanted to read for a while but could never find in my local library back home.. and now I can read it. Yay, books!
In the class I have that long paper for, we had to read Stuart Little and Catcher in the Rye. I read the latter book in 10th grade. Yeah uh, I think I've changed. Hmm.. perceptions.. wow. I'm writing my paper about it and a poem. Comparisons.. okay.
So yes, I'm actually very busy and stressed despite the fact I've only been making posts about my story lately. I have lots of thoughts about it, that's all.
And now for the rest of them:
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Remember how I talked about Duke in the red outfit meeting up with Dawn by herself for the first time? Well, now I have a slightly different look than how I described him in the mid-40s chapters.
Now I'm imagining Duke looking neat and composed. And his hair is slicked back (it's normally not; that's not a surprise I hope). Can I just say? How I am visualizing Duke in that scene is quite something. He's quite something. He looks classy. He looks clean (well, apart from the fresh cuts on his right hand and wrist from punching a hole in a mirror and letting the glass shards pierce his skin). Duke, damn does he look classy there.
Oh and Duke wouldn't be protesting against seeing Dawn. Unlike that 40s chapter *coughs*. So he won't have dirt all over him due to being dragged along the ground. Duke would be a civilized young man. And he looks amazing.
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I'm thinking of changing the events of the prologue too. I don't like how I wrote that there was this whole battle in the town, and everyone was required to fight in it. It seems too weird and unrealistic to me.
I'm thinking of changing it to Twinkle's parents sending her and Fauna (you know, her little sister) to the nearby city for some reason. I don't have that down yet, but anyway. Twinkle and Fauna go to (without knowing, of course) the dangerous part of the city (which isn't the one they're from, obviously). They go down streets and dark alleyways. Then a black cloud obstructs the sky due to the storm of phantoms (or whatever I'll change their name to) coming in and blocking out any light. And then someone shoots and kills Fauna with a gun. But it's unclear whether or not the person was aiming the gun at her or the phantoms. Twinkle doesn't know what happened until the phantoms leave and she can see again. Once she does, she realizes her sister is now dead.
And of course the same shit to Twinkle applies. Twinkle's mental state falls apart, and yeah, she becomes traumatized by it. Her parents blame her for Fauna being dead. They don't care about Twinkle's mental health at all. They just make things worse for her. It's just hell.
This all happens a little over one year prior to the events in the story. It's supposed to show the steady influx of phantoms coming to and taking over the land. And by that, I mean the in-land cities and towns. Not where Dawn or Ardere are from.
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I also should clarify the ages that Fierdan and Dawn are put into the project world. Ryen's as well.
So here goes:
• Ryen would be 11 or 12 (so not 8 like I originally said, I think)
• Danny/Pre-Fierdan would be 7 or 8
• Dawn would be 6 or 7
... years old.
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Art ideas:
• Finny
• Fauna
• Calliah
• Z
• Taurel
• Risak
• Sparkle
I still need to draw those characters, so you guys can at least begin to see how I imagine them.
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Yeah, that's it. I think.
Bye. <3
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